Monday, 29 March 2010

Character re-do

After reading through my work with my teacher we found some changes that need to be made in order to improve. I will now edit my previous post on introducing a character with the improvements that need to be made.

INT. BEDROOM NIGHT

BettySmith, aged 25, hard , your ordinary loner. She is plain looking, nothing special about her. She wears a black t-shirt black jeans with black boots. By taking one look at her you can see the ominous strains caused by a life of private fear , sadness, empitness and loneliness. The glum expression on her face never changes always still, her deep dark sunken eyes stay fixed on a photograph of a child, her own child. Tears drop from her eyes but her gloomy expression never changes she stays very still.

Maria moves towards her dusty dresser drawer which she opens, hundreds of images of the same child drop the floor. Maria drops to the dirty floor where she lies down. Tears uncontrollably fall from her eyes. The room has many toys cluttering it. Maria grabs a blue soft teddy and rips it apart.

Sunday, 21 March 2010

Analyze Opening Sequence To A Thriller - Leon

I have been set the task to analyze the opening sequences to a thriller. I chose to analyze the thriller Leon because i have seen this film and i feel that this opening relates to the narrative in a big way.

The opening to Leon creates tension and creates meaning which relates to the narrative. As the film opens you can hear non- diagetic music been played, the music is orchestral which builds up tension before any picture is being shown in the frame. The orchestral music makes the audience aware of the genre of the film as this type of music is generally played in Thrillers. An establishing shot is used to set the scene. The establishing shot expresses the setting to the audience which is a field of trees. The camera is titled downwards and is tracking fast through trees. The tilt shot gives the audience perspective of the surroundings below. The shot is then quickly reversed and titled upwards this immediately changes the audiences view as they see many buildings which the audience is able to identify as New York. The title of the film Leon then fills out the entire frame.

The scene is then jump cut and transforms into a long shot which is used to show the change of setting, the camera is till panning but now it seems to be panning through the streets of New York. The makes the audience aware of the setting and sets the narrative. Yellow taxi cars are shown in the frame which also familiarizes the audience that the setting is New York. The non-diagetic orchestral music is still being played throughout the opening sequence which builds up tension as it becomes louder as the camera tracks. Zoom is now used to make the audience aware of the sigh post that says "Welcome To Little Italy" this suggests to the audience that the characters or protagonist maybe be Italian. The camera movment then changes in the left direction into a zoom which zooms inside a shop the creates the audiences attention as they want to see whats inside. No characters have been shown yet and no dialogue has been used but the audience is already gripped and interested. The silence in this opening is used to create suspense, this familiarizes the audience with the particular genre of the film as many thrillers use silence to grip the audience.

A close up shot is used to introduce the fist character into the opening sequence. Mise-en-scene is used to create meaning and narrative into the opening, for example a glass of milk is placed on a table with the characters hands. This suggests to the audience that the character is strong because they drink milk. The non-diegetic music has stopped being placed making the scene intense. A extreme close up shot is used to show the glasses worn by the character, this allows the facial expressions to be hidden by the character as glasses can be seen as a shield. Dialogue is now used as the two characters exchange words, the characters are speaking in Italian which suggests they are from Italy. Shot reverse shot is now used to bring tension into the conversation as the audience can now see the characters relation to one and other. The lighting is very dark in the frame suggesting something illegal is taking place. The lighting used in this scene makes the thriller genre clear to the audience as the setting is now very dark and dull with very few props on show. Dialogue is then used to set the narrative, for example the character says "lets get to business" which suggests the male works for him.

Mise-en-scene is now used to introduce the protagonist character, for example a photograph of a male is now shown to the protagonist. Shot reverse shot is still used between the two characters to show their current relationship. The protagonist's expressions and feelings are still hidden by the glasses which makes the other character uneasy as he is unaware of the answer he will receive when asking "are you free next Tuesday" suggesting to the audience a job needs to be done. The protagonist accepts he is free on Tuesday. The glass of milk is then drunk by the character suggesting the character needs to build hes strength up which builds up the narrative. A close up show of the photograph is shown to the audience just before it is taken and the character leaves. This makes the audience aware that the character is a hitman and has been set a job to complete. This then makes the audience aware of the genre of the film as the narrative has now been set and explained to the audience.

Saturday, 20 March 2010

Structuring The Story

It is important to use the correct structure when planning your story. The Three Act Structure represents a screenplay. You must already know :

  • What and who your story is about
  • How it ends
The model below can be used to design the structure of your story.

Act 1 - Set up Act ll - Confrontation Act lll - Resolution

The third column is used to summarise the ending of the story.

Friday, 19 March 2010

Media Assignment: Recreating an opening sequence of a thriller (silence of the lamb)





We were assigned to create our own adaptation to the Opening Sequence of a film which fell under the thriller genre. As a group we all decided to recreate the opening sequence to the 1992 film Silence of the lamb this was because we felt as if this closely related to the idea of building
tension within a scene. We recreated the shot types that were shown in the original opening sequences to this thriller such as an Establishing shot , Close up, Long shot and Medium shot. It was important we timed the shots to ensure they were exactly the same length as the ones from the original version. Once we shoot the scene we were able to edit it on the Mac computers. We ensured all the shots flowed in well with each other. We used voice overs to create the same sounds that were used in the original.

After taking out this task i learn't how to direct a scene effectively For example we drew out a video shoot shot list for this task before filming any of the sequence. We had to analyse the original opening sequence as a group and record specific times for each shot that was shown. After completing our video shoot shot list i was able to direct Kate and Saul when filming, this included deciding where each shot will take place and ensuring the timing and type of shot was correct. It was important for us to capture the same shoots as in the original opening sequence in order to make the re-make as realistic as possible.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3X4owjfOrCo

Above we have posted a link to the original opening sequence to the 1992 thriller of Silence of the Lambs In order
to show the comparison between our Version and the original and establish the shot types between the two.

Actress -Sinthuja
Filmed by - Kate and Saul
Edited by - Saul
Directed by - Maria

Preliminary Task - Short Scene

As a group we were set the task to produce a small scene. The scene and to have the following shots, Match on action , 180 degree rule and shot reverse shot. The scene also had to have the following dialogue

A - I'm sorry
B- Really
A- You know you can trust me
B- Thanks

As a group we interrupted the scene in our own way. We choose to use a girl (Maria) and boy (Saul) acting in this scene. The way in which we choose to interpret this was that the couple had previously had an argument which Maria was sorry about. Saul enters the room and sits opposite Maria. You can see from his facial expressions that he is upset with Maria. After shooting this scene we edited it to fit the task. We learn't how to edit on the Mac computers after carrying out this task. We were able to use and add in transformations to our project along with how to adjust the sound to make it more clearer to the audience. It is important we are able to edit as we will have to edit our main opening sequence when we finish shooting it.

The end result of our Preliminary Task is shown below.

Actor and Actress - Maria and Saul
Recorded by - Sinthuja and Kate
Edited by Saul

Thursday, 11 March 2010

Story board and Video sheet shot list - first draft






After our group discussion on the narrative of our thriller we we made a story board and video sheet shot list which shows which shoots we intend to use for each scene. This is our first draft of a story board and video sheet shot list as we may change some factors as we progress and begin shooting the opening to our thriller.

Saturday, 6 March 2010

Screenplay

I was instructed to construct a short screenplay based on the story making sure that i use standard screenplay format :

  • More than one scene
  • Screen directions
  • Dialogue
A girl and her father were driving along a country road on their way home when they saw a young girl hitchhiking. They stopped and picked her up and she got in the back seat. She told the girl and her father that she lived in a house about 5 meters up the road. She didn't say anything after that but just turned to watch at the window. When the father saw the house, he drove up to it and turned around to tell the girl they had arrived but she wasn't there. Both him and his daughter were mystified and decided to knock on the door. They told him that they once had a daughter who answered the description but she had disappeared years ago. Today would have been her birthday.

Screenplay

Scene 1

EXT.COUNTRY ROAD-DAY

Katerine and her father Tom driving along a country road. They approach Jenny the hitchhiker. The car stops and allows Jenny to enter.

JENNY
(Enters the car)

Thank you very much for the lift. It is appreciated. My house is about 5 Metres up the road.

TOM
(Smiles)
That's fine I expect your family will be woundering where you are.


SILENCE

Jenny no longer speaks. She stares out the window.

EXT. OUTSIDE HOUSE-DAY

TOM

We are here Jenny.

Tom turns around to see Jenny's reaction but is surprised to stop she is missing. Tom and daughter Katerine raised there eyebrows.

EXT. AT THE DOOR OF HOUSE- DAY

Marisa
(Raised eyebrows)

Hello? How can i help you?

Tom

Hello my name is Tom, I picked your daughter Jenny up and promised to bring her here, but as I told her we have arrived she was nowhere to be found. I'm really confused as to what was happened.

Marisa

My daugher? Jenny? I'm sure you must be mistaken.

Tom
(Insistent)

No I definitely had her in my car I am sure of it.

Marisa

I'm sorry but she disappeared years ago. We haven't seen her. It is a very upsetting for us.

Tom

I am very sorry to disturb you. I had no idea but i saw her today i am sure of it.

Marisa

Ok please come inside, both of you.

Tom and Katerine enter the house.


INT. INSIDE THE HOUSE

Marisa

Please take a seat.

Tom and Katerina take a seat in Marisa's living room. The room is full of pictures of Jenny.

Tom

That's the girl! That's Jenny. Thats who I had in my car. I'm sure of it.

Marisa

Maybe you just recognised her from the pictures, her photograph was shown regularly on the news at the time of her disappearance.

Katerine

No it was her today.

A tear drops from Marisa's eye, Tom stands up and places his hand onto of Marisa's for comfort.

Tom

Maybe she is still around, maybe she's just around the corner. We could go and look for her!

Marisa

Maybe it was her ghost.

All three characters look at one another with there jaws dropped.

Thursday, 4 March 2010

Character

I will now create and introduce a character that appears in our group thriller project.

INT. BEDROOM NIGHT

MARIA SMITH, aged 30, hard , alone your ordinary loner. She appears plain looking nothing directly special about her. She wears a black t-shirt with black jeans with black boots. By taking one look at her you can she the ominous strains caused by a life of private fear , sadness, empitness and loneliness. The expression on her face never changes always still, her deep dark eyes stay fixed on a image of a child, tears drop from her eyes but her expression never changes she stays very still.

Maria now moves towards her dusty dresser which she opens, hundreds of images of the same child drop the floor. Maria now drops to the dirty floor where she lies down. Tears uncontrollably fall from her eyes once again as she holds on to a photograph of a young boy, a child.

The bedroom Maria lays in is covered in dust, dirt and photographs, photographs on the floor , on the wall and on the door .These photography are all of the same young child. The room has many toys cluttering it. Maria grabs a blue soft teddy and rips it apart, she is now moving towards violence.

40 Mins.

Group Meeting

All members of the group had a meeting to brain storm ideas for the opening to our thriller. We have been considering the characters, sets and props for each narrative. Our ideas include :
  • A psychotic stalker preying on a young girl.
  • A teacher with an obsession of a student.
  • A man with a deep secret which causes him to murder.
  • A young girl being dragged into a car -kidnapping.
  • A car crash, hit and run situation.
After considering each idea we have decided he narrative we are going to choose. Our opening narrative is going to be a hit and run car crash and it is going to be a psychological-type thriller.
We chose this storyline because we felt that we could portray this idea best.

As a gorup talked of what sort of props, sets and characters that we will need. We have decided that our thriller project will be set in Winchmore Hill, however we still need to discuss the final details. We have brainstormed and come up with the possibilities of a forest/woods, a side street and a cemetery, but we are still deciding on other factors of our film.

As a group we have now been making story boards which explain what will happening in each shot and how the camera will be placed in each shot.

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